techniques edited

[rocky]

Great Forest Technique/C Rank

Name: Great Forest Technique - Daijurin no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Mokuton
Description: a unique Ninjutsu technique used by senju ninja . Using this ability to utilize Mokuton (wood release) techniques, senju ninja will extend a large mass of spikes from their arm. These spikes can act both to impale his target and as a barrier to protect a comrade.
Other:
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)

Birth of dense woodland/B Rank

Name: Jukai Koutan - Birth of dense woodland
Type:
Rank: B
Element:
Description: is a Ninjutsu technique unique to the Senju clan which uses the Wood Element. After doing the needed hand seals, a dense growth of forest and branches grows from the ground to entangle his target.
Other:
Range: Far (10m+)

Wood Clone Technique/ C Rank

Name: Moku Bunshin no Jutsu - Wood Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Mokuton
Description: . Using the ability to utilize Mokuton (wood release) techniques, the user will form handseals and cause beams of wood to emerge from his body. This wood will morph and form a clone capable of utilizing all the same Mokuton techniques as the original. The clone can take more damage then regular clones because of it s made by a thick material. 5cp for each clone
Range:

Wood Barrier Technique/C Rank

Name: Moku Jouheki no Jutsu - Wood Barrier Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Mokuton
Description: is a unique Ninjutsu technique used by Senju Clan members. Using their ability to utilize Mokuton (wood release) techniques, the user will form handseals and cause beams of wood to emerge from the ground. The beams can converge to form a half spherical barrier to deflect an incoming blast.
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)

Wood Spike Technique/C Rank

Name: Wood Spike Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Mokuton
Description: The user performs the needed hand seals and then put a hand forward. Spike of wood will be released from the palm. To make the technique more dangerous it is usually used with a fire jutsu.
Range: 0m to 5m

Grand Waterfall Technique/A rank

Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A ranked
Element: Suiton
Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away. Their must already be a large amount of water to use this technique.
Range: Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)

Water Encampment Wall/B Rank

Name: Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B ranked
Element: Suiton
Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack. A a-ranked or higher attack can easily get threw the wall.
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)

Water Prison Technique/C Rank

Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C rank
Element: Suiton
Description: a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)

[Hyuga Airisu]

Aware this is still a WIP so ignore me if this was planned and simply reply when you are done. Just letting you know 1) Please remove canon mentions in descriptions and 2) No need to put "Mokuton user only" in the "Other" description, seeing as the required element is Mokuton, so it is obvious. =)

[rocky]

I corrected that and their done. In the one it says a name that's going to be my charrie's name

[Akimichi Chouhiko]

1. I still see some Canon descriptions and obvious redundancies--the things ROFL informed you about. You can remove those.

2. Please add a "Range" factor to each technique, based off the system used on Leaf Ninja. Range in techniques is important for reasons I should not have to state.

3. Fix up minor spelling errors and such. Also, elaboration on descriptions of the techniques would be nice. Go into more detail than what leafninja gives you.

[rocky]

edited

[Akimichi Chouhiko]

Name: Jubaku Eisou - Tree Restraint Eternal Burial
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Mokuton
Description: a unique Ninjutsu technique used by Senju clan members. First the user may blanket the area in water using the Hahonryuu jutsu. This will help hold his target in place. Next they will form hand seals to create vines of woods to grow from the ground an entangle their target. These vines will continue to grow into a large tree, further restricting the enemy's movements and preventing their escape. Finally the growth of the gigantic tree will be enough to permanently crush and entomb their body.
Other:
Range: 10 meters

I'm rather iffy on this. I know that this technique was used in the anime by Yamato, but in comparison to the manga--the lead authority here--it's weird. The anime tends to use jutsu differently. Anyway, Suiton: Hahonryuu is not actually needed for this technique to work--it just facilitates it. If you want it to be a prerequisite, then you may have it in the description, but you must put it in the other section as "Must know Suiton: Hahonryuu".

Also, this technique is just a filler jutsu the anime employs. If you already have Jukai Koutan, then it's rather pointless.

For Moku Bunshin no Jutsu, please put down a CP cost. Make it similar to other clone techniques and their CP cost (look around the jutsu lists).

I don't see how fire adds to the Wood Spike technique. If it does, the Katon would have to come from an ally, seeing as a Mokuton user already uses 2-3 elements.

[rocky]

I edited the first technique out. Added the cp cost and the fire would come from someone else I wasn't planning on my character having Katon as well